Friday, August 28, 2026

Review for Mercedes Lackey's anthology, A MANY SPLINTERED THING

 

A MANY SPLINTERED THING
Fantasy

 

 

RELEASE DATE:
November 24 , 2026

PUBLISHER:
DAW

ISBN/ ASIN NUMBER :
9780756421311

RATING:
4.5

 




A MANY SPLINTERED THING is the twentieth anthology of short stories set in Mercedes Lackey’s Valdemar world by various authors. Being chosen to write in such a beloved setting must be a great honor. The authors have done an admirable job. While a few stories did not appeal to me (that is to be expected) not every story will resonate with every reader.

I also like that the authors explored different time periods in Valdemar and settings beyond Haven and the Collegium. Some authors even included, or mentioned, much loved characters.

 

TIME AND TIDES

AUTHOR: Charlotte E. English
RATING: 4.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://charlotteenglish.com/

 

Bardic Miriel is grieving the death of her luthier brother. When she finally decides to clear out his room, she finds a familiar shape waiting there. Herald Hiralda has spent years out on Circuit, doing her heraldic duty. When she hears about Davon’s passing, she returns to Haven to help Miriel. Can the two women overcome the misunderstanding that has kept them apart?

TIME AND TIDES is a poignant and bittersweet story. And short. I practically zipped through it. Regardless of its length, I still enjoyed it.

 

ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD

AUTHOR:  Brigid Collins
RATING: 4
AUTHOR LINK: https://brigidcollinsbooks.com/

After years stationed at Haven, Herald Marli is finally setting out on a Circuit. And she will not travel alone. Her lifebonded partner, Kimfer, a former bandit, will accompany her. A letter from her hometown urges Marli to return. Despite her apprehension about being back, she persuades her friend to seek the medical treatment she needs. Will her hometown open Marli’s eyes to what is important to her?

I feel that parts of the story are missing. If Marli and Kimfer appear as side characters in another book/series, it is possible I have not read it or do not remember them. Sadly, I am behind on Lackey’s books, especially the Collegium books.

 

TOGETHER

AUTHOR:  Fiona Patton
RATING: 4
AUTHOR LINK: https://grokipedia.com/page/fiona_patton

Laryn, a Bardic trainee, is assigned to compose a song about romance. A friend commissions her to write one about her mother’s current romantic interest. Laryn visits the woman and listens to her stories about her late husband and her new beau. A week later, she presents the song to her friend’s mother before submitting it to her teacher.

This story did not appeal to me overly much. It felt a little lacking. I do like that Laryn took the time to listen to her friend’s mother lament about her past relationship with her husband. And that her song helped the woman decide her relationship with her new beau.

 

BOUND HEARTS

AUTHOR:  Jeanne Adams
RATING: 3
AUTHOR LINK: https://www.fantasticfiction.com/a/jeanne-adams/

Herald Investigator Beryl and Herald Zaleth have concluded a child-trafficking case. They celebrate their victory at a tavern and decide to act on their attraction. The next day, they wake bound and cut off from their Companions. Beryl and Zaleth are forced to rely on their wits to escape. Their ordeal leads them to another noble involved in child trafficking. Can Beryl and Zaleth stop the noble before another innocent person is harmed? And can they accomplish this without their Companions’ help?

I did not care for this story overly much. It just came off as bland to me. It does touch on some sensitive subjects such as drugging and child-trafficking.

 

COLLEGIUM CRESENDO

AUTHOR:  Jennifer Brozek and Marie Bilodeau
RATING: 3.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://jenniferbrozek.com/

Aimar Noteleaf and Ozan Newsong struggle to adjust to life at the Bardic Collegium. One sings with too much emotional excess, while the other needs to improve his breath control. They also have roommate troubles. Aimar and Ozan search for the perfect song for their end-of-semester performance. At the last moment Ozan chooses a song he knows suits them both. Will Aimar and Ozan win over their audience? Or will they flub their performance?

The only part of the story I enjoyed was the song the two Bardic Trainees performed, “Sun and Shadow”. It is one of my favorite pieces from Mercedes’ filk music. Sadly, I do not own the CD, so I must listen to it on YouTube. I regret not buying more of the CDs when I had the chance years ago. I am not a fan of the new artist performing Lackey’s filk music. I found myself softly singing the lyrics under my breath as I read.

 

WITHOUT A NAME

AUTHOR:  Phaedra Weldon
RATING: 3.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://www.phaedraweldon.com/

Herald Reyes remembers neither his childhood in Karse nor his surname. Two important notebooks, ones that hold clues to his past and class notes, have vanished. Reluctantly, and with help from his healer friend, Reyes accompanies his beloved to her parents’ anniversary party. There, he begins to question the mysterious death of her brother. What truths will Reyes unearth? And will his sleuthing cause him to become the next victim?

This story did not appeal to me. I could not get into it or connect with the characters.

 

HORSES AND HOUNDS

AUTHOR:  Ron Collins
RATING: 2.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://www.typosphere.com/

Lady Annaliese Brig and Lord Klayton Medrys are both skilled players of Horses and Hounds. Their fathers plan to use their victory to advance their houses in Valdemar. Annaliese and Klayton cannot help admiring one another’s competent abilities. However, Klayton is determined not to allow his father’s underhanded tactics to prevail. Who will win the Horses and Hounds match?

So far, this is my least favorite story in the anthology. I do not see how it fits in the Valdemar world. It focuses on two young nobles playing a game almost like chess. The only clear Valdemar connection is a Herald overseeing the game. I do not remember this game mentioned in any of the books I have read.

I do like how Annaliese and Klayton start off as adversaries. Then, as they start to play, they learn about each other. Soon they start to communicate through their moves, without anyone catching on. Basically, it became their love language.

 

THE CIRCLE SPEAKS OF LOVE

AUTHOR:  Brenda Cooper
RATING: 3
AUTHOR LINK: https://brenda-cooper.com/

Marjom, a former border herald, is navigating a new relationship with a fellow herald. She and Whitman, her new lover, must prepare the latest group of trainees for war with Ancar. Before they graduate, Majom has one final lesson to depart: the difference between lust, passion, and love. Plus, the consequences each can carry in the field.

This is another story that really did not appeal or resonate with me.

I do like that Marjom and Whitman are seasoned heralds rather than fresh recruits. Marjom initially viewed her transfer as “forced retirement”, and she hesitated to broadcast her relationship with Whitman. But after sharing her past experiences with her students, Marjom decides to embrace it openly.

 

A PITYING OF TURTLEDOVES

AUTHOR:  Elisabeth Waters
RATING: 4
AUTHOR LINK: https://www.fantasticfiction.com/w/elisabeth-waters/

Lord Arvid Melander is not a typical highborn. He is a Novice of the Temple of Thenoth and enjoys his work. Arvid also teaches a herald trainee to use her animal mindspeech gift. When his mother decides it is time for him to marry, she gives him a short list of carefully chosen highborn candidates. In secret, Arvid uses turtledove to learn more about each woman, not to court them but to help them. Will Arvid find his ideal match?

I like that Arvid does not share his mother’s views on social status. He does not care about his future spouse’s class, only that they have compatibility and shared interests. I also like how he uses the information gathered from his animal friends to better understand his mother’s candidates. And help them.

 

PATRON OF THE ARTS

AUTHOR:  Susan Shwartz
RATING: 4.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://susanschwartzauthor.com/

Herald Jeri investigates the artist who has captivated the Blues with her caricatures. The woman’s work, especially a portrait of a young noblewoman, helps a grieving Count find solace. After meeting the gifted artist, Jeri suspects there is more to her than she reveals. When a fire breaks out, it becomes clear the woman is being targeted… And the truth about her emerges.

This story features characters that I remember fondly. Alberich, who has been a longtime favorite of mine, Myste, Selenay, and Skif and his Comapnion Cymry. Skif does play a significant role in the background… Talia and Dirk are only mentioned once. Though, it has been a long time since I read the books, I never remember Alberich speaking like Yoda.

 

COURAGE AFTER ALL

AUTHOR:  Stephanie D. Shaver
RATING: 4.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://sdshaver.com/bibliography/

Maps and Kamden’s relationship changes when Kam is chosen by his Companion at thirteen. He leaves for Haven to begin his heraldic training and duties. She stays behind and eventually marries into a prominent family. Maps soon discovers the true nature of her husband and mother-in-law. Kamden’s return comes just when she needs it most. Will he help exonerate Maps from the charges against her? And will her in-law’s abuse be exposed to their community?

Trigger warning: this story includes depictions of martial abuse. So, readers sensitive to this topic may wish to skip it.

 

ENCORE

AUTHOR:  J.L. Gribble
RATING: 2.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://jlgribble.com/

Bard Keona has every detail planned for her journey south. She even includes two herald trainees to accompany her and her bardic companion. Keona hopes the boys’ presence will make the trip easier for Ellie, who is rumored not to travel well with others. The journey is not what Keona expects, with Ellie getting along with the trainees. The greatest surprise, however, awaits the two heralds-in-training.

I did not get this story at all! It never drew me in. I did like that the two bards are older and experienced rather than young and fresh-faced.

 

KEEP AND KIN 

AUTHOR:  Anthea Sharp
RATING: 4.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://antheasharp.com/

Healer Tarek returns home with his bardic love. His younger sister, the new lord of the keep, asks him to care for her quest. Tarek discovers the woman is from Hardorn and that her wound is slow to heal. After hearing her story, Shandara suspects she has Earthsense. They reassure Carinne that Valdemar welcomes such gifts, unlike her homeland.

This story is one of my favorites in this anthology. The four characters are easy to like. I love how confidently Elen held her own against men trying to harm Carinne. She did not let them to belittle her because she is a woman. I also like how Elen offered the Hardorn woman a safe place to stay, where she could use her gift openly and freely.

 

WHEN THE WIND STOPS BLOWING

AUTHOR:  Louisa Swann
RATING: 4.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://www.louisaswann.com/?mbt_author=louisa-swann

Roli and his Tayledras companion has left the Vale to search for his parents. Their journey has been plagued by misfortune, the latest being a terrible storm. They seek shelter at a farmstead where the owner has been wounded by a wyrsa. Roli is asked to brave the storm to bring the healer herald staying at the village. He not only faces his fears but a wyrsa attack. Can Roli return with help before it is too late? And what else does the storm bring?

Finally, a story with a Hawkbrother in it! I would have been disappointed if this anthology had not included one. They have always been my favorite. Yeah, the Hawkbrother’s part in the story is small, but I am alright with it.

 

CONTRACTS

AUTHOR:  Kristin Schwengel
RATING: 3.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://www.fictiondb.com/author/kristin-schwengel~68212.htm

Jaya belongs to a side branch of the Fifty Families of Mornedealth. She is troubled by the growing distance between her and her husband. Jaya tries to reconnect, but when her efforts fail, she turns to her younger brother for help leaving. Throughout the journey, she clings to hope that her husband will come after her. A week after Jaya reaches her destination he appears, bearing small gifts meant to prove his love. Will Jaya forgive Kev? Or is he too late to patch things up between them?

The story came off a little bland for my tastes. What caused the distance? It left more questions than answers. And things between them felt unresolved.

 

A COURSE ON COURTSHIP

AUTHOR:  Dee Shull
RATING: 3.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://valdemar.fandom.com/wiki/Dee_Shull

Healer Serrill knows little about romance, but he is determined to do right by his beloved. When a friend facing the same dilemma asks for advice, he agrees to seek guidance for them both. Serrill first turns to his fellow Healers but finds no answers. He then widens his search to friends beyond the Healing Collegium. A triad couple offers advice that helps him understand how best to court his Herald.

The story felt a little dry and lackluster to me. It left me feeling “meh”. I just could not empathize with the characters involved.

 

RIPOSTE

AUTHOR: Paige l. Christie
RATING: 3.5
AUTHOR LINK: https://paigelchristie.net/biography-paige-l-christie/

Kwell sets out to discover why one particular guard is so disgruntled on happening upon trysting couples. She even enlists the help of the guard’s friend, who is often caught in the act by that very guard. First, Kwell and Relea must learn who Teig is interested in. Then they can devise ways for their paths to cross so nature can take its course. Will their plan succeed?

Kwell’s continuous use of puns annoyed me. Again, the story left me feeling meh and disinterested.

 

GREATER LOVE

AUTHOR:  Mercedes Lackey
RATING: 5
AUTHOR LINK: https://www.mercedeslackey.com/

Lily and Violet are drudges – much like serfs – on a Holderkin farmstead. Lily, the older sister, has garnered the unwelcome attention of the Father’s spoiled son. Other servants and drudges try to protect her, even urging the sisters to seek refuge at the Temple of the Goddess-Wife. Then an unexpected ally steps in to help Lily, one even the Father and his son cannot dismiss.

They saved the best for last! I always enjoy reading Lackey’s books, especially her Valdemar books. They have a special place in my heart. And this short story is no exception!

I suspected what became of Lily would happen. It was her kind temperament that clued me in. The ending told me that is not the end of her and Violet’s story.

 

 

 


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